Spring...In...The Desert
spring time in the desert
vivid colors of red and gold
tiny birds perch in the shade of outcrops
all the males spreading their colorful feathers
waiting for a mate, their calls alluring
Remember that Boar in Florence?
14 hours ago
9 comments:
You're fashionably late. A very stirring piece, I imagined the whole scene in my head as I read.
What a beautiful piece. I can visualize the poem unfolding before my eyes. Wonderful.
Late, but worth the wait. Thanks for coming by BES.
brilliant!!!! i can see your words.
your words pop out--vivid and wonderfully descriptive
Much thanks to all of you for reading my work. When I feel better I will thank each of you.
love-bd
very vivid...a serene one with a merry background..keep writing
Oh, bd, yes indeed vivid perfection! ~ very nice!!
hope you're feeling much better!
~Calli
Alluring indeed.
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