Springs.....Circles
sky opens rain falls
water streams fresh leaves afloat
tiny twigs boulders trap all
wind blown circles form
cherry blossoms ebb and flow
down stream wind makes puddles deep.
Remember that Boar in Florence?
14 hours ago
Monday, March 02, 2009
sky opens rain falls
water streams fresh leaves afloat
tiny twigs boulders trap all
wind blown circles form
cherry blossoms ebb and flow
down stream wind makes puddles deep.
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just exceptional - especially the acute observations like the water in a puddle being deeper due to the wind \|\
A beautiful microcosm!
Hi Melanie--
This is exceptional, as Kitehorse says. I think your puddle is deep as the ocean.
Love to you on this fine late winter's day--
Lovely..every line!
Great circles...I can see the puddles and the wind blown circles. Nifty photo, as well...
Exquisite!!! Great observations!!! And, even great is the manner of expression!!!
Those deepening puddles are like spring seas. Beautiful poem.
Beautiful picture and words - another great one from BD.
Words that bring the world to life. Lovely.
I like it, a wonderful little show of natures processes. At first it reminded me of Ecclesiastes 1:7, but then I begin to feel sorry for the loss the cherry tree is suffering.
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I truly enjoyed your poem it is wonderful! The image is amazing as well!
What a gorgeous take on this wonderful prompt. LOVE the photo!
Hugs, G
Sorry I am so far behind. I want to thank you all for your very kind words about my work. You, Kitehorse,
Deborha G, Beth, Kilauea P,Sue, Dear Jim,Brosreview,Sweet Sandy C, Dear Marty, Anothy N, Tammy Lee and Geraldine.
Thank all for reading my work. You all are great poets and I love to read your work.
love-bd
Beautiful lines. They leave me yearning for Spring! Kudos!
Beautiful...it has "spring" all over it- can't wait!
I can see within my mind's eye, the circles in the puddles as the wind blows ... and the ripples never stop. I enjoyed this!
Well done-- I felt like I was watching the rain through your eyes.
All connected - one to another. Lovely.
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