Beloved Dreamer: Old Lovers

Saturday, March 21, 2009

dancing
the two old lovers
elegantly
circled to a Latin beat

PULKIT said...: a nice verse :)
regards
PULKIT
(http://19goes20.blogspot.com)

hope to have a comment from u too!; 22 March, 2009 05:59
The Write Girl said...: Beautiful poem! I have an image of a sweet, old couple dancing lovingly together. They have probably shared a lifetime together. Great image and story.; 22 March, 2009 09:57
SarahA said...: It came through fine, no worries. I am just sad my words made you all teary eyed. But on the other hand any emotion is better than none so *dance*
I love your words equally, you know. You always seem to say so much with so little and the reader is able to unravel according to their own life experiences.When time more my own I promise to spend more time in this place, right here among your words. I will pull up a chair and make myself comfy getting to know each of your babies. There never seems to be enough hours in a day *sigh*; 22 March, 2009 16:31
zorlone said...: This is a nice poem. My first time to visit your blog and I found myself looking through your poems.
Will drop by once in a while.; 23 March, 2009 06:52