Beloved Dreamer

Tuesday, March 17, 2009

many summers pass
through a garden
beautiful flowers
last but a day
braking your heart

12 comments:

Vodka Mom said...: the petals open
colors blind
my eyes and heart
spring has come
at last.; 17 March, 2009 20:56
Pradeep Bhatt said...: @ beloved beautiful, touching, graceful

@ vodka...strong yet soft. its amazing how simplicity works...dont you think?

rotten leaves
on the rusty carpet
break and break
shreik and creak
under my fottsteps and heart.

cheerio..have a nice day; 17 March, 2009 22:12
The Write Girl said...: Beautiful poem Beloved Dreamer and I like the picture. Makes me think of spring. Thanks for checking out my site. I hope you have an awesome Wednesday!; 17 March, 2009 22:14
Shadow said...: intense, but fleeting, beauty; 18 March, 2009 02:19
gaffergirls.com said...: good morn..
pop in for a visit
and feel the love
mona & the girls
ps so enjoy your writing...; 18 March, 2009 11:06
Jeeves said...: Intense, touched me.; 19 March, 2009 01:10
Beloved Dreamer said...: Yea, lets have a drink while we watch the buds bud.

love-bd; 20 March, 2009 10:30
Beloved Dreamer said...: Pradeep, thank you kind words and for your lovely poem

love-bd; 20 March, 2009 10:32
Beloved Dreamer said...: WG, thanks for reading my work. I like yours a lot.

love-bd; 20 March, 2009 10:33
Beloved Dreamer said...: Sort of like a shadow no?
Much thanks for reading my work.

love-bd; 20 March, 2009 10:34
Beloved Dreamer said...: Ah gaffergirls, always a pleasure to visit you. Thanks for stopping by.

love-bd; 20 March, 2009 10:36
Beloved Dreamer said...: Jeeves, thanks so much for your kind words. Still too many words to describe what I wanted to say. Must stay in the moment.

love-bd; 20 March, 2009 10:46

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