Loveless....
Lost in cloudy mist
Overlooked alone
Visions in my head
Evolve to tears
Lonely now I walk
Endless empty paths
Sightless now
Sighing over you
Remember that Boar in Florence?
15 hours ago
Thursday, March 05, 2009
Lost in cloudy mist
Overlooked alone
Visions in my head
Evolve to tears
Lonely now I walk
Endless empty paths
Sightless now
Sighing over you
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"Visions in my head
Evolve to tears" - To simply put it, I am your fan!!!
sorrow is immense when said in few words...
i love this and thanks a lot for dropping by my blog and commenting on my poem. i have the same opinion as u do about it. it's just it doesnt fit into any of cafewriting's feb challenge. that's why i didn't post it.
thaaaanks a lot, Melanie!
this was too good !! perfect meaning and acrostic :)
you've managed to transfer the loneliness, well done
So tender and painful. It is the poets who will carry our stories on. I believe that totally.
Beautiful words, BD
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