Friday, March 20, 2009

Hearts Broken Ache



Lovers come to tryst
Bitter words exchanged
Tears fall silently
HEARTS BROKEN ACHE
Tears fall silently
Bitter words exchanged
Lovers come to tryst

10 comments:

Brosreview said...

Wow!!! Quite emotional!!!

The Write Girl said...

Hi Beloved Dreamer,

Beautiful and melancholy words are expressed in this piece. And the image captures a very intimate moment unfolding for the reader.

Jeeves said...

Melancholy. Beautiful words and emotions here

Pretty Me!! said...

nice !!

Amias said...

Oh but the making up can be so wonderful indeed, as your picture contrast your poem .. and the circle is complete! Yes, nice.

SweetTalkingGuy.. said...

Love can be such a heartache - I like the words "Hearts Broken Ache".

Shadow said...

why does that have to happen??!?!?!

!nversed Poignancy! said...

Wow!,
Beautifully put across..
Good One!

Marty said...

It is the cycle that we all face

Nadege said...

bd ~
this is a poem that stirs the
heart...the rhythm is mesmerizing.