Acrostic Poem.......Nostalgia
Nothing could or word bring her back
Overwhelmed with sorry
Silent tears still fell
Talking did not help the pain
Again and again he thought it through
Loving her was not enough, not a cure
Gnawing emptiness surrounded him as he stood by her pale white stone
Insignificant prayers went unanswered
Almighty above, why ,why did she have to go?
7 comments:
You painted such a pretty picture... Sad but pretty!
Oh BD, this was so sad. When I think back on love one lost .. I ask why too!
This is quite sentimental.
"Almighty above, why ,why did she have to go?"
These lines intensify the entire piece!!!
this was so inventive and full of emotion. i can just picture this forlorn lover crying out to the skies. completely beautiful in every way.
Feeling so real and true
Linda
how very sad..... full of emotion and love.
how sad, I've just been catchin up on you. I hope you are well and everything is good...your poetry is still amazing my dear.
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