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the old man would not be cajoled
not even by the few who still cared
though a recluse by nature he could not suffer fools
thus by temperament, he was an unpleasant man.
Remember that Boar in Florence?
14 hours ago
Friday, March 13, 2009
the old man would not be cajoled
not even by the few who still cared
though a recluse by nature he could not suffer fools
thus by temperament, he was an unpleasant man.
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Brilliant snippet, bravo.
living on ones terms is tough!
very nice! i just hope i don't grow up to be like that...
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Beautiful post Beloved Dreamer. You are brilliant in so few words.
wow i envy you for that invite from write up ;)
but surely you are so deserving!!!
This is really, really good.
Thank you for stopping by my blog and saying hello! You have a wonderful site! I'm always so impressed with those who can write poetry....such talent to be able to spin language like that. So nice to "meet" you! :)
perfection in thought and execution.
You captured this unpleasant man's demeanor and view of life perfectly in those few well written lines.
Brilliant execution.
Much thanks Clay
Yes Magiceye, but there is not better way.
Thanks Shadow for your comment. Don't worry you won't.
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Thanks Tom. They were hard words to put together.If I had had more time(my son's PC was broken) I would have made it longer. I love and look forward to your comments.
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Much thanks Nadege for your kind comments.
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