Monday, December 08, 2008

3WW



the balance in life
dictates time and place
though wander we must
in darkness...
until the heart is weighed

10 comments:

ThomG said...

Very nicely done. Great image, simple but it conveys a point. One criticism - minor - I think this would read better with until rather than till. But that's just me.

SandyCarlson said...

And that is life. Beautifully said.

Linda Jacobs said...

I love that last line! It conjures so many images!

I tried to go to the link you left on TOP but it wouldn't work.

Beloved Dreamer said...

Thanks you Sandy for your ever kind words.
I have three web sites now and still cannot make a link.



love-bd

Beloved Dreamer said...

Tom, I have changed till for until and it works. Once again I thank you for your comments.


love-bd

Beloved Dreamer said...

Sorry Linda, I just can't remember how to make a link. I have three sites now and I must learn how to
do this.
If you know how just send me an email.
The last line says it all. I was in Ga. for Thanksgiving and my sister and I went to see the Tutankhamen traveling exhibit. I have always been interested in the boy king.

Grace DeWitt said...

I like the simplicity of this. I think I will try this 3WW

Michelle said...

Yes, "until the heart is weighed".

Thanks for visiting peony moon, Beloved Dreamer. I'm glad you liked the Rilke extract. It's from his poem titled As once the winged energy of delight. I'm sure you could find a copy of Stephen Mitchell's English translation of the entire poem on the internet.

Beloved Dreamer said...

Grace, I think you would be great at this. Do join us please.


love-bd

Beloved Dreamer said...

The ancient Egyptians believe that the heart and not the mind must pass muster with the gods. Thanks for your kind words.


love-bd