Beloved Dreamer: Courage.....My Shadow

Monday, November 17, 2008

Courage.....My Shadow

words colors fill me
though my soul walks closer now
the path is narrow

16 comments:

SandyCarlson said...: Those narrow paths make the need for more courage all the more poignant.

Welll done. Thanks.; 17 November, 2008 16:11
fourwindshaiga said...: I love the feel of this poem, and the idea that courage walks with us.; 17 November, 2008 16:21
Deborah Godin said...: This feels like it's balanced on the edge between time and timelessness - lovely!; 17 November, 2008 18:25
anthonynorth said...: When things hem us in, that's when we need courage.
Nicely done.; 18 November, 2008 04:25
Marty said...: Beautiful Haiku!; 18 November, 2008 06:18
Vodka Mom said...: i love this.....; 18 November, 2008 06:53
Pam said...: I agree with Deborah. This haiku seems out of time's bounds. What a wonderful journey you write of.; 18 November, 2008 07:56
gautami tripathy said...: Yet you are so courageous...

foundations of wonder; 18 November, 2008 11:08
Grace DeWitt said...: Beautiful images. I have the hardest time with Haikus because I'm such a talker :P So, it inspires me when you write these short poems that are packed with so much meaning.; 18 November, 2008 11:29
zoya gautam said...: ..not very many words..but no dearth of meaning..lovely..many thanks..; 18 November, 2008 17:05
Patois said...: The words on the "page" just leap out. This does feel so all encompassing.; 19 November, 2008 01:18
Sweet Talking Guy.. said...: Wonderful words of wisdom!; 19 November, 2008 06:16
Tammy said...: It is courageous to allow our soul to get closer. To really see our truth. Nice job!; 19 November, 2008 23:53
Quiet Paths said...: This has both tension and hope in its definition of courage. Great job.; 21 November, 2008 16:09
Braja said...: Hey Beloved...that was beautiful. There's a poem on my post today you might like...; 22 November, 2008 20:10
Beloved Dreamer said...: Thank you all my friends. I have been dealing with pain for the past few days. Please forgive me for not taking the time to thank you one by one..

love-bd; 25 November, 2008 09:52

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