Tuesday, September 02, 2008

Spectacle......Of Man



jasmine hermit moon
crescent shadows blaze in play
come now ripe heavy full
autumn bares no seed of man
flawed fruit withers on the vine

12 comments:

Wordcrafter said...

jasmine hermit moon.... what a beautifully scented night vision. I love it.

tumblewords said...

Ohmigosh! This is beautiful! Beautiful!

susan said...

beautiful and sad.

SandyCarlson said...

Oh, that moon....I feel the sorrow in this one, too. Beautifully done. Glad you're back!

zoya gautam said...

.."flawed fruit withers on the vine"
_tell tale graphics-something lost..thanks for sharing..

fourwindshaiga said...

Very beautiful.

Deborah Godin said...

This is deep and lovely - puts me in mind of the song by Dar Williams, Calling the Moon. You have a beautiful blog, glad I went back to OSI one more time!

Art and Poetry said...

Very interesting one!

spacedlaw said...

I love this, in particular the last two lines.

paisley said...

autumn bares no seed of man

very clever line....

Kathiesbirds said...

Interesting juxtoposition of images, words, and lines there. To me, "come now ripe heavy full" is a powerful line.

Fireblossom said...

Mmm, broodingly beautiful.