Beloved Dreamer: hay(na)ku

Tuesday, August 19, 2008

time
grows short
earth now barren
~~~~~~~~~
spring comes anon
shoots peek
anew

VK said...: Reminds me that winter is coming.
*shudders*
Pretty verse though.; 19 August, 2008 13:46
Crafty Green Poet said...: and time passes like that, just so quickly; 19 August, 2008 15:38
Nathan said...: I like the way the lines are contained by "time" and "anew." This is lovely verse.; 21 August, 2008 06:49
gautami tripathy said...: Good one!

plunging in the tunneled abyss; 22 August, 2008 00:05