Dorway Of Love
seeds of love must pass
a doorway from now to then
a blossom grows there
sweetest lotus men do seek
to drink of waters so pure
scared haze of gold
an essence beyond compare
strip hearts of men bare
their souls search in lust and pain
while seeds of life bare fruit
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19 comments:
Excellent Love Poem.
Thank You also for the wonderful photography!
(Just a small p.s-check your link from OSI, Blogger would not let me in when I clicked your name there. I want others to see your wonderful site and all your great work. It deserves to be seen.)
I couldn't get in either, but got here by typing Beloved Dreamer in google search box.
Lovely poem, and I like the idea of passing through the doorway into love.
mystical. draped in a subtle film of fantasy/magic.
just wondering - why drop all punctuation.
please visit my sight when you can.
great to meet you.
(((((Melanie)))))
I was thinking about you today and wondering if you were well. Glad to see you're still writing such wonderful words.
Thanks for this beautiful poem, Beloved Dreamer. Beautiful images.
spirituality, found in love
embraced, a lovely poem.
spirituality, found in love
embraced, a lovely poem.
what wonderful poems you have here, i really enjoyed browsing through your poems.
Rita
..to drink of waters so pure.. while seeds of life bare fruit.. beautifully written..
You have a wonderful way with words!
"a doorway from now to then..." Lovely.
...search in lust and pain. Yep been there a good deal of my life.
beautiful lines.. thank u..
So vivid!
Beautiful poem. Really like how you put it together.
~JD
Quite beautiful, Beloved Dreamer.. love the feelings I get while reading such lovely words.
The words are lovely. The feelings evoked by them are a mix of pleasure and pain -- rather like love itself.
I have just spent a bit of time scrolling through your blog and liked pretty much everything I read. I rather thought I would the moment I saw your header. Exquisite.
Wonderful images pressed deep into this poem. I disagree with the lack of punctuation but then that's the way I tend to write. I think if your lines are as carefully written as yours seem to be it is no problem.
Thank you all so much for reading my poem and for all the lovely comments.
I have been very ill and away a long time. Still resting but trying to write.
much love-bd
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