Thursday, May 01, 2008

#3 Word Wednesday



Late but here mine.

empty shells on the waves
ride the tides of lost souls
sand castles ignored recede

14 comments:

tumblewords said...

a lonely and beautiful picture!

TC said...

This seems sad and desolate, but paints a beautiful picture.

WriterKat said...

There is a peacefulness about this, I enjoyed reading it. :-)

Jane Doe said...

Beautiful! Short, and sweet, and to the point. I loved it.

Billy said...

Very melancholy but written with such beauty. This one is really among your best work!

sage said...

Nicely done--love your blog and the photos

Cassandra said...

Lovely words! Sometimes the shortest poems are the most powerful.

Beloved Dreamer said...

As always a great big thank you.


love-bd

Beloved Dreamer said...

Thank you tc for your kind comment. Come visit again.

-bd

Beloved Dreamer said...

Much thanks writerkat. I am glad you liked it.

-bd

Beloved Dreamer said...

Thank you Jane, and I'm glad you liked the haiku. I like your work too!

-bd

Beloved Dreamer said...

Oh sweet billy, you always say the nicest things. Hope all your work is going OK. So glad you stopped by.

love-bd

Beloved Dreamer said...

Thanks sage. come by again.

-bd

Beloved Dreamer said...

Much thanks Cassandra for your comment.

-bd