Monday, April 14, 2008

Chance Encounter




how does it begin
a shy half smile
a quick glance

hearts quicken
beating as one
longing yet afraid

our chance encounter
sweet expectation
one brief moment

we turn away
breath stills eyes shift
the song has changed

7 comments:

tumblewords said...

Love this one and the final line is superb!

Beloved Dreamer said...

Sue, thanks so much for once again reading my work. It's so hard for me to keep up. I don't know what to do about it. I think my poetry is suffering for it. I don't know how you do it. Write all those wonderful poems that you do. Life seem to step in and take me away.

love, Melanie-bd

Selma said...

You have captured so well, so wistfully, the feelings one would experience during a chance encounter. I understand completely, by the way, how hard it can be to find time to write. But don't give up, that would be a waste!

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Like passing ships... I always wonder what might have happened next?

anthonynorth said...

A situation perfectly described.

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Billy said...

This is so accurate, as well as perfectly written!